The history is really good, but I don't see why this is a game because we can't chose nothing in the game we just follow a straight line, more like a comic i think
Yes. This is called a visual novel and this is the way they usually go. You play them for their good stories. Some may have choices and multiple endings.
I recently had the chance to play this game, and I wanted to share my thoughts in a more detailed manner. There were aspects that I genuinely enjoyed, such as the captivating art style and the intriguing initial storyline. However, I do have some constructive feedback to offer.
To start with the positives, the game's art style is truly commendable, and the initial storyline piqued my interest. Unfortunately, I found that the story's quality seemed to decline as it progressed. One issue I encountered was a lack of balance; the romance plotline seemed to take up more time than the main plot, which left me somewhat confused about the overall direction of the narrative.
Moreover, as the storyline continued, it became increasingly convoluted, especially during the dream sequence and the cliffhanger ending. This left me feeling somewhat unsatisfied, as it seemed like a somewhat rushed way to conclude the story.
Another area of improvement could be the dialogue. The characters, who are meant to be college students, often came across as somewhat immature and teenage-like. Crafting more realistic and age-appropriate dialogue could greatly enhance the overall immersion and believability of the game.
To summarize, I believe this game has tremendous potential, and I offer this feedback with the intention of helping it improve further. Please don't take my comments as criticism, but rather as constructive suggestions. I genuinely enjoyed the game and hope that the developer can refine it in future updates. I've been mulling over these thoughts for a while, and I'm excited to see how this game evolves.
Good God, this shit is amazing! So glad I decided to give it a go. You can really tell how much love was put into it by how polished everything is.
the animated sprites, the fact that the characters actually wear different clothes, the music and noise choices, the timing/pauses after dialogue to make things land, the way they keep talking over each other, the chapter selection thingy, hell the whole car scene is just absurd! it's so impressive!
and the writing is so good, too! it's really clear the author isn't uploading rough drafts, they're really well edited.
at first I was disappointed with it being SFW but I've come to realize it's to maintain the very manicured atmosphere choices. it would clash with the flow of the story and the emotional roller-coaster the reader, and the protagonist goes through.
I know VNs are stuck in the "you can't rate them anything other than 5 Stars bc the algo will just crush them" thing like with Uber but this really *is* 5 Stars out of 5!
really looking forward to more of this, both from the actual author but also fanart as well.
I'm only sad to realize that I spoiled myself in regards to a pretty big plot twist I think? and all bc of math lmao, I fucking hate math now
I love this VN! Honestly wish the nude sprites weren't conveniently censored lol, but I still love the story and am excited to find out what happens in the finale!
I haven't finish the current version yet but I'm pleasantly surprised by how good the writing is and wish to know more about the writer if someone could give me a way to find them !
Wow it's great! The story is captivating, and sprites (art in general) are nice. Love all of these funny hilarious situations between characters! I mean sometimes it's so chaotic I can't. I'm really also involved in the plot, wondering how the srory'll continue going...
Amazing art, story and characterization. This is one of those games I can't stop thinking about even after completion. My only complaint is I wish there was more. Besides that great game! <3
Yo, there were no updates for like a year and authors twitter account seems to be deleted. Does anyone know if author is ok and if there will be any updates?
Yo, I'm not a furry or a visual novels fan but this is so awesome dude, I freaking love every detail, character, storytelling and the art it's too good!
I love this game so much!! The plots, subplots, story, ALL OF IT IS AMAZING. Not sure if the recommended playthrough experience is all in one night, but I loved it nonetheless!! Cannot wait for the next part if there ever is one!! Would pay gladly if I wasn't broke lol. The music also is amazing!
I always enjoy people who do stuff like this and keep them on a list so when I have the cash I can go back reimburse them for their work. It gives me things to do when I have nothing and not enough cash for other more expensive hobbies.
The game is about university students who act like they are 14.
The music is all the same no copyright tracks you've heard in every second VN on itch.
And the whole thing ends the moment it becomes mildly interesting.
The character art is nice, and the dialogues are well-written, but that's hardly enough to pull the dead weight of the annoyingly mediocre mystery story.
This author should just make a game about university students, it would be much better than this mess.
Bitch if you don't shut your discord mod looking neck beard having 2 mm defeater having talentless 2001 hp laptop having headass up like bitch sees a lil five year old boy and licks his lips like bitch you RKelly if he was gay like stfu before I slap the EVERLIVING SHIT out of you
On a serious note, your "critique" is just a bucketload of ass, since it only came out as harsh and rude. Matter of fact, you come out has really negative on most visual novel that you criticized. I can see that you're really fun at parties. Why would Cockhole make a visual novel that focuses on the university students? There won't be any plot, if that's the case. You don't know talent when you first see it.
absolutely love the audiovisuals on this, the white noise, the footsteps, the movement of the character sprites, their expressions, ahhhh!!! and the cliffhanger at the end!! love it, bonus points for the gay fluff and stuff. love that too.
10/10, definitely looking forward to the full update.
just found this and played it one sitting instead of working and hot damn was this good. wasn't even looking for something like this but i loved it all the same. like to the point that i'm considering outing myself as a furry just to recommend it to my roommate lmao. hope it's going well!
I really enjoy the details of the story and the art style of the illustrations. Although my English level is not sufficient to support me in reading a novel of this length fluently, I was still able to do so with the help of ChatGPT's translation. Can't wait to see more exciting works!
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The history is really good, but I don't see why this is a game because we can't chose nothing in the game we just follow a straight line, more like a comic i think
Yes. This is called a visual novel and this is the way they usually go. You play them for their good stories. Some may have choices and multiple endings.
ppl usually call games like this "kinetic novel" cuz in visual novels you have some choices that impact the story
I recently had the chance to play this game, and I wanted to share my thoughts in a more detailed manner. There were aspects that I genuinely enjoyed, such as the captivating art style and the intriguing initial storyline. However, I do have some constructive feedback to offer.
To start with the positives, the game's art style is truly commendable, and the initial storyline piqued my interest. Unfortunately, I found that the story's quality seemed to decline as it progressed. One issue I encountered was a lack of balance; the romance plotline seemed to take up more time than the main plot, which left me somewhat confused about the overall direction of the narrative.
Moreover, as the storyline continued, it became increasingly convoluted, especially during the dream sequence and the cliffhanger ending. This left me feeling somewhat unsatisfied, as it seemed like a somewhat rushed way to conclude the story.
Another area of improvement could be the dialogue. The characters, who are meant to be college students, often came across as somewhat immature and teenage-like. Crafting more realistic and age-appropriate dialogue could greatly enhance the overall immersion and believability of the game.
To summarize, I believe this game has tremendous potential, and I offer this feedback with the intention of helping it improve further. Please don't take my comments as criticism, but rather as constructive suggestions. I genuinely enjoyed the game and hope that the developer can refine it in future updates. I've been mulling over these thoughts for a while, and I'm excited to see how this game evolves.
the game only has a cliffhanger ending because its still in development
1. The game isn’t finished, of course the ending isn’t an actual ending
2. Have you met college students? I’ve met 1st graders with higher emotional maturity than most college kids
3. yea the plot is confusing and the romance is overbearing at times
4. Meow
i love this
but is it still getting worked on?
Good God, this shit is amazing! So glad I decided to give it a go. You can really tell how much love was put into it by how polished everything is.
the animated sprites, the fact that the characters actually wear different clothes, the music and noise choices, the timing/pauses after dialogue to make things land, the way they keep talking over each other, the chapter selection thingy, hell the whole car scene is just absurd! it's so impressive!
and the writing is so good, too! it's really clear the author isn't uploading rough drafts, they're really well edited.
at first I was disappointed with it being SFW but I've come to realize it's to maintain the very manicured atmosphere choices. it would clash with the flow of the story and the emotional roller-coaster the reader, and the protagonist goes through.
I know VNs are stuck in the "you can't rate them anything other than 5 Stars bc the algo will just crush them" thing like with Uber but this really *is* 5 Stars out of 5!
really looking forward to more of this, both from the actual author but also fanart as well.
I'm only sad to realize that I spoiled myself in regards to a pretty big plot twist I think? and all bc of math lmao, I fucking hate math now
I love this VN! Honestly wish the nude sprites weren't conveniently censored lol, but I still love the story and am excited to find out what happens in the finale!
It's so sad that the end of the VN
It was so good wish there was more
Chiming in to note that the .icns icon on the Mac build is corrupted.
I haven't finish the current version yet but I'm pleasantly surprised by how good the writing is and wish to know more about the writer if someone could give me a way to find them !
If I recall correctly, he took down his twitter page. I don't know why though :/
well that's a shame, thanks for your reply though
THIS IS SOOO GOOD! I WANT MORE, PLEASE. I WISH I HAD MONEY TO BE A PATREON (TWT) SO GOOD IM DYING!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
IS THERE GOING TO BE A SPANISH VERSION? I REALLY WANT TO SHOW THIS TO MY FRIEND BUT THEY DON'T KNOW ENGLISH! (TWT)
if im reading it right a pupper who did not realise he is dead or something. hm i may poke just because of that
I can't wait for the full story to be released!!!!
well, despite having a fairly enigmatic developer, this one shows promise and is already pretty good
wow this was really great, cant wait for the next update
next update will be the full game
Wow it's great! The story is captivating, and sprites (art in general) are nice. Love all of these funny hilarious situations between characters! I mean sometimes it's so chaotic I can't. I'm really also involved in the plot, wondering how the srory'll continue going...
Keep it up!! <3
I love and enjoy the game so much! Can't stop thinking about it after finishing it. Also love the story! Looking forward for the next update.
I can't wait to read the update
Amazing art, story and characterization. This is one of those games I can't stop thinking about even after completion. My only complaint is I wish there was more. Besides that great game! <3
Can't wait until part 2 drops!!!
Just wanted to say that I'm enjoying the story so far. I cant wait for the rest of it to drop.
is there ever gonna be NSFW in this game?
It specifically says in the description of the game: "This visual novel is safe for work."
Edit: So more than likely not.
Yo, there were no updates for like a year and authors twitter account seems to be deleted. Does anyone know if author is ok and if there will be any updates?
Thats a relief, however there were no posts for 200 days. Makes me a bit worried about the future of the project.
Yo, I'm not a furry or a visual novels fan but this is so awesome dude, I freaking love every detail, character, storytelling and the art it's too good!
10/10 bruv, enthusiastic for the next ep!
I went into a state of shock when I realized it was the same park
Love this game so fair cant wait for a new version to come out
Hope the author adds a language option.
翻译成中文了，要的自己下载.
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失效了给我说一声
太棒了，火鸡，虽然我不需要，但我为遇见而高兴！！从头帅到脚趾间
I love this game so much!! The plots, subplots, story, ALL OF IT IS AMAZING. Not sure if the recommended playthrough experience is all in one night, but I loved it nonetheless!! Cannot wait for the next part if there ever is one!! Would pay gladly if I wasn't broke lol. The music also is amazing!
I always enjoy people who do stuff like this and keep them on a list so when I have the cash I can go back reimburse them for their work. It gives me things to do when I have nothing and not enough cash for other more expensive hobbies.
The pictures really don't do this game justice. This game is really good.
This visual novel had great dialog and great character placements. Props to to creator ❤❤
The game is about university students who act like they are 14.
The music is all the same no copyright tracks you've heard in every second VN on itch.
And the whole thing ends the moment it becomes mildly interesting.
The character art is nice, and the dialogues are well-written, but that's hardly enough to pull the dead weight of the annoyingly mediocre mystery story.
This author should just make a game about university students, it would be much better than this mess.
bro, literally shut the fuck up. i dont see you participating in the divine act of creation rn so quit being a virus to those who are.
Bitch if you don't shut your discord mod looking neck beard having 2 mm defeater having talentless 2001 hp laptop having headass up like bitch sees a lil five year old boy and licks his lips like bitch you RKelly if he was gay like stfu before I slap the EVERLIVING SHIT out of you
this guy gets it
mf thinks he's a game critic
On a serious note, your "critique" is just a bucketload of ass, since it only came out as harsh and rude. Matter of fact, you come out has really negative on most visual novel that you criticized. I can see that you're really fun at parties. Why would Cockhole make a visual novel that focuses on the university students? There won't be any plot, if that's the case. You don't know talent when you first see it.
oh, that’s a goooood one.
absolutely love the audiovisuals on this, the white noise, the footsteps, the movement of the character sprites, their expressions, ahhhh!!! and the cliffhanger at the end!! love it, bonus points for the gay fluff and stuff. love that too.
10/10, definitely looking forward to the full update.
just found this and played it one sitting instead of working and hot damn was this good. wasn't even looking for something like this but i loved it all the same. like to the point that i'm considering outing myself as a furry just to recommend it to my roommate lmao. hope it's going well!
I really enjoy the details of the story and the art style of the illustrations. Although my English level is not sufficient to support me in reading a novel of this length fluently, I was still able to do so with the help of ChatGPT's translation. Can't wait to see more exciting works!
hey I swear I don't usually read VNs but this one is something else