Played it yesterday. Forgot to comment. This is.. damn how do I say it? Amazing! I actually felt the need to want more. This was far from a waste of time which considering my personality is rare. The characters were actually realistic and not over exaggerated like in most visual novels. Both the physical and the mental design of characters aren't shallow but not too deep to the point where it becomes edgy and just plain annoying. The writing was alright don't get me wrong, I simply felt like some sentences were unnecessarily long. I spotted 1 or 2 grammar mistakes. I'd point them out but I already spent so long writing this. My bad, Melon
p.s Please make sure not to put too much pressure on yourself I feel like the content will decay in value if you do. Take your time and make sure to proof read everything through.
I think I'm gonna ask Spencer's hand in marriage lol wow I love his design a lot! I already said that but the art style is super cool, and I really like Spencer's attitude
Hi! I really loved your vn. It had a fresh new design like the timestamps, and even the story had a whole new perspective. I'm looking forward to the next chapters! More power!
P.S. I just love how you drew your sprites ๐ค๐ค๐ค
The UI with the time stamps on the map is SUCH a genius idea. I really dig it! Instead of saving, we're able to go back to those time stamps and alter our path. WOW! Also super cute sprites. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this! :)
A little short but I really enjoyed this so far, like all the other commenters I love the art style especially. I don't really have a sense of where the story is going but I'm definitely interested to find out.
This game really surprised me. I knew I was going to enjoy first look at the artstyle. Really love how you started off the game, Sudden as if you've just woken up. That joke in the last bit though really got me, Love how you executed that. Would love to see more of the story. Though I was a little bit shocked that there were no saves in the menu bar.
I do kind of wish there was a bit more of the story for version 0.1.1 just so I could get a sense of what the story was about and what kind of people Spencer and Kurt are, but I think you added enough intrigue to want me to keep an eye on this VN. Not to mention the art is really nice to look at. I'll be looking out for more updates!
This games art style is adorable. The story is really interesting, Though I was really surprised that one option legitimately makes you die of old age, overall really fun can't wait to play more :)
I said I'd post again when I tested it, so here it is.
It's a good start, obviously not a lot going on yet. On the first choice I picked 'No' just to see where it went, and naturally got nada overall. I laughed at it though! It was a cute way to be like "Nope, don't choose this (yet?)"
I look forward to seeing more.
Also, as has already been requested, a save/load feature would be nice.
For whatever reason I couldn't bring up this page on Android Chrome, but had no issues on PC Chrome... Had to download the .apk on my computer and transfer it to my phone. I don't know why or if there's any way to fix it. Maybe it's the name of the game or something? I don't know.
Anyway, I'll post again after I've actually tried the game. Just wanted to give a heads up on the Android browser issue. It could just be my phone, but there could be some people unable to try the game if they can't access the page.
Thanks for letting me know! Seems like it's working on my phone, but if it keeps failing to load on yours, please let me know and I'll email itch.io about it.
Cute artwork. I like the style that look like you cut the art from the paper it's nice. Love the way that it's have a timestamp in game that look like the checkpoint. Is in the future gonna have anything like save file or something nsfw lol. Keep doing it!๐๐ Oh before i forget can you repair the UI below while playing.
I think it too small for me Thx for creating game.
Thank you for your kind words. I plan to have support for "long" Android devices in the next version, which should fix the small UI. I'll also add saving/loading. As for NSFW, I plan to release a separate patch that would enable a few NSFW extra scenes.
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i'am waiting for the update O-O
Bruh, your art style is SO GOOD! I loved the history, the characters and the art style, keep it up!!!
Thank you!!!
Thank you!
New update...*TRIGGERED*
Played it yesterday. Forgot to comment. This is.. damn how do I say it? Amazing! I actually felt the need to want more. This was far from a waste of time which considering my personality is rare. The characters were actually realistic and not over exaggerated like in most visual novels. Both the physical and the mental design of characters aren't shallow but not too deep to the point where it becomes edgy and just plain annoying. The writing was alright don't get me wrong, I simply felt like some sentences were unnecessarily long. I spotted 1 or 2 grammar mistakes. I'd point them out but I already spent so long writing this. My bad, Melon
p.s Please make sure not to put too much pressure on yourself I feel like the content will decay in value if you do. Take your time and make sure to proof read everything through.
Thank you! I'll make sure to put more emphasis on proofreading in the future.
I think I'm gonna ask Spencer's hand in marriage lol wow I love his design a lot! I already said that but the art style is super cool, and I really like Spencer's attitude
Thanks!
Is this VN gonna be one of those in which you meet the characters and then you pick a route or something like that?
Currently, I'm planning to have one main route with multiple endings.
What an incredible update! I really liked the motion effects and lighting effects... Also really good writing and soundtrack! ๐
There are so many different ways this story could go so i'll definitely be looking forward to the next update. :)
Also, I know it confirms the fact that I'm horribly immature but I really laughed out loud when the game rejected my inappropriate dish names ;__;
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! And hey, I'm the one who implemented it, so I'm at least twice as immature.
Thanks! Sure, I'll add it as an option.
eeey new update, downloaded it immediately, the art style and animation is so fantastic, keep up the good work, i give you and your VN a thumbs up
Thank you!
I just started downloading the 2nd update and I'm so hyped right now !!!!
Loved the latest update. Can't wait for the next installment!
Thanks!
I'm really loving the visuals so far! The art style is fantastic, and they're implemented in incredible animations!
Thank you!
Does this VN has gay romance? Looks interesting btw.
Yes, although there's not much of it currently. Thanks for your interest!
Hi! I really loved your vn. It had a fresh new design like the timestamps, and even the story had a whole new perspective. I'm looking forward to the next chapters! More power!
P.S. I just love how you drew your sprites ๐ค๐ค๐ค
And I hope you don't mind if I used Spencer for my DP. He's just too adorable and awesome ๐๐๐
Thank you! And sure, no problem.
Thanks!
This took a 180, you either have a story or you d i e. hm. I n e e d m o r e
The UI with the time stamps on the map is SUCH a genius idea. I really dig it! Instead of saving, we're able to go back to those time stamps and alter our path. WOW! Also super cute sprites. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this! :)
Thank you! Yeah, that's the idea behind the timestamps. A lot of people asked for save files as well, though, so I'm adding those too.
exactly what I wanted to say btw the character we are controlling is hella cute :) I love this guy even tho it hasn't even started ๐
A little short but I really enjoyed this so far, like all the other commenters I love the art style especially. I don't really have a sense of where the story is going but I'm definitely interested to find out.
Thanks!
This game really surprised me. I knew I was going to enjoy first look at the artstyle. Really love how you started off the game, Sudden as if you've just woken up. That joke in the last bit though really got me, Love how you executed that. Would love to see more of the story. Though I was a little bit shocked that there were no saves in the menu bar.
Thank you! Saves will be there in the next version.
Simply put, I love it can't wait to see more
I'm glad you like it!
Rip Spencer, he will always be the best car dealer in the history of the entire North America.
I absolutely Love your art style, I can't wait for the next update!
Thanks!
I love the art style a lot, Spencer is so cute and Kurt is so cool. I can't wait for the next update!
Thank you!
I do kind of wish there was a bit more of the story for version 0.1.1 just so I could get a sense of what the story was about and what kind of people Spencer and Kurt are, but I think you added enough intrigue to want me to keep an eye on this VN. Not to mention the art is really nice to look at. I'll be looking out for more updates!
Thank you!
I love Spencer
Yea your right, I love him too
I would get a plushie of him.
Interesting game, really love the art style! looking forward to whatever you have planed for this.
Thank you!
i'm really interested but need better art style for the character
I literally made this account so I could make this comment. Delete this
i just saying need better art style for the character and i never say the art style of the character are bad
Thanks for your interest! What about it didn't you like?
i don't like the white outline and sorry for my bad english
This games art style is adorable. The story is really interesting, Though I was really surprised that one option legitimately makes you die of old age, overall really fun can't wait to play more :)
Thank you for your interest!
Hi! I really liked the game and especially liked the art style (โโขแดโขโ)
Now let's go to the question, how many routes will be available at the time of the game's release? Just wondering)
Thanks! Currently I'm planning for one main route with multiple endings.
Interesting... I've never seen a visual novel with a single route)
I said I'd post again when I tested it, so here it is.
It's a good start, obviously not a lot going on yet. On the first choice I picked 'No' just to see where it went, and naturally got nada overall. I laughed at it though! It was a cute way to be like "Nope, don't choose this (yet?)"
I look forward to seeing more.
Also, as has already been requested, a save/load feature would be nice.
Thank you! You can expect saving/loading in the next update.
Well I kinda expected NSFW scenes to show up at some point. I mean, your name is literally Cockhole.
Considering this is a really early build of the game I wouldn't place my bets on NSFW scenes appearing this early on XD
prolly
For whatever reason I couldn't bring up this page on Android Chrome, but had no issues on PC Chrome... Had to download the .apk on my computer and transfer it to my phone. I don't know why or if there's any way to fix it. Maybe it's the name of the game or something? I don't know.
Anyway, I'll post again after I've actually tried the game. Just wanted to give a heads up on the Android browser issue. It could just be my phone, but there could be some people unable to try the game if they can't access the page.
Thanks for letting me know! Seems like it's working on my phone, but if it keeps failing to load on yours, please let me know and I'll email itch.io about it.
Yeah, even your reply only appeared on my phone once without a problem, then I couldn't get it to appear anymore.
As of this current update as far as I can see yeah, though the developer has stated that there's NSFW stuff planned in the future
Thank you for the Android version โบ
Quick question, will there be a Patreon?
Edit:
I noticed that there are no settings, only volume changes. Even there is no save/load function. Will there be settings in the next update?
No problem!
I'll be launching Patreon along with the next update. Also, sure, I'll add saving/loading and settings.
Thank you!
Very cute art style, Can't wait for more! :)
Thank you!
Will this game have NSFW?
Yes, I'm planning on releasing a patch in the future that would enable a few extra NSFW scenes.
Is it possible to just add the "enable/disable nswf" feature in future game settings?
Entirely possible. I'd likely make builds in which the patch is "pre-applied" and you'd just need to enable it in the options.
Cute artwork. I like the style that look like you cut the art from the paper it's nice. Love the way that it's have a timestamp in game that look like the checkpoint. Is in the future gonna have anything like save file or something nsfw lol. Keep doing it!๐๐ Oh before i forget can you repair the UI below while playing.![](https://img.itch.zone/aW1nLzM1NjU0MDEuanBn/original/ALS7kA.jpg)
I think it too small for me Thx for creating game.
Thank you for your kind words. I plan to have support for "long" Android devices in the next version, which should fix the small UI. I'll also add saving/loading.
As for NSFW, I plan to release a separate patch that would enable a few NSFW extra scenes.
Hi, will there be an Android version?
And add more information about the project, please)
Hi! Sure, I can make an Android version. I'll make one within the next few days. I've also added some additional info. Thank you!
Can you please give us more information about your project and who you are as a creator?
I've expanded the description a little, and added a twitter link and an update schedule. Thanks for your interest!